Question

11．假如你是李华，你的美国好友Daniel想了解你的英语考试情况、暑期安排和对新学校生活的期待．请根据Daniel电子邮件的内容，用英语给他写一封回信．

From：Daniel@wde．ac．us

Hi， How are you？I know you're busy with your English exam right now．How is it？Anyway，it'll be all over soon．What are you going to do during the summer vacation？What do you look forward to about your new school life？Please e-mail me and let me know． Daniel

要求：
1文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

From：Li Hua@163．com

Hi， Glad to hear from you!                                                Hope you'll have a nice time! Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】I did well in English exam because English is my favourite subject我英语考试很好因为英语是我最喜欢的科目．because引导的原因状语从句，不能与so连用．
【高分句型二】I also believe ①I will ②make great progress③if I④try my best in my new school我也相信在新的学校如果我努力我就会取得进步．
①believe后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②make progress取得进步．
③if引导的条件状语从句遵循主将从现的规则．
④try one's best to do sth尽力做某事．

解答 Hi，
Glad to hear from you!I did well in English exam because English is my favourite subject．【高分句型一】（英语成绩很好）Anyway，I will be free after the exam．I will travel to Beijing with my parents．I also plan to work as a volunteer in my community．Besides，I will probably visit my grandparents in the countryside during the summer vacation．（暑假做什么）I am looking forward to my new school life．I hope my new school has many different kinds of clubs．I also believe I will make great progress if I try my best in my new school．【高分句型二】（新的学习生活的期待）
Hope you'll have a nice time!
Li Hua

点评 写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句．可以用一些高级词汇．还要注意句子的关联．