Question

【题目】书面表达

在校快三年了，你对学校、同学和老师都有了较深的印象了吧！请你以 My Dream School为题目，根据以下提示和要求，写一篇英文短文。

1. What’s your dream school like?

2. What will you do in such a school?

3. How are you getting on with your classmates and teachers in such a school?

写作要求：1、语句通顺、符合逻辑。

2、不少于60词。

3、可适当发挥，但不能出现自己真实的校名和姓名，否则不得分。

Answer 1

【答案】My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn. We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our good friends. The students are polite and friendly. We all know how to keep our school clean and tidy. There is no litter around the campus.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，介绍你梦想的学校。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如spend+时间+doing，one and a half hours, besides, look like, have a rest, not only...but also...等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。