Question

姜堰四中为了激发中学生创意灵感，提高学习英语热情，举办了题为“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。

房子大	有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园；
房间多	至少8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房……
很舒适	可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；
其它	1.--- 2.---

要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 要点须包括表格中的信息，但不要使用真实姓名和校名等；

3. 词数：80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Ladies and Gentlemen :

I’d like to tell you about my dream home.

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Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen:

I’d like to tell you about my dream home. My dream home should be large enough so that I can live with my family. It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it. And there are at least eight rooms, including kitchen, bedrooms, shower room and reading room. Besides, it must be comfortable. At weekends, I can have parties with my friends at home. After school I will do my homework in the reading room and in the morning I read books in the garden. I think I will have a happy life with my family here.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，题目中已经给出了标题和相关的信息点。在写作时，要紧扣这些要点，并且适当的发挥，使文章内容更完善，结构更完整。写作时注意句子的完整性和表达的正确性，尤其注意主谓一致。文章可适当使用一些连接词，使逻辑更严密。

【亮点分析】

这篇文章结构完整，表达准确流利。文中用到了很多有用的短语和表达方式，例如：so that所以，以便于； at least 最少；at weekends在周末；It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it.有两层楼，并且后面有个花园。With，有……；I think I will have a happy life with my family here我想我会和家人在这里幸福的生活。

考点：提纲类作文。