Question

书面表达

学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在寒假期间到本市儿童医院和第五敬老院组织志愿者活动。你决定去其中一个地方做志愿者。现请你用化名“李华”写一封申请信。

注意：

1．信中要包括以下要点：

(1)去哪个地方做志愿者；

(2)说明原因；

(3)能做什么事情；

(4)对志愿者工作的感受或体会。

2．请选用下面表格中的提示词语，并可结合自己的实际适当增加细节。

3．词数：不少于60词。

4．文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。

(考生不得抄写已给出的开头和结尾，只需写考试题目所要求的内容。)

Dear Chairman,

　　I am Li Hua, a student from Class Five, Grade Three．I know that you want new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them．

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　　I hope you’ll let me join your volunteer group．I’m looking forward to your reply．

　　With best wishes．

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Possible version 1：

　　I love reading books and I am good at history．I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help．Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer in this winter vacation?I will try my best to help the kids and make them happy by telling funny stories．I think volunteer work is great．It is not right for us to think about only ourselves．We should always think about people around us and try to make them happy．

　　Possible version 2：

　　Can I go to No．5 Old People’s Home to be a volunteer?I like helping old people because they need more help than others．Besides, I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright．When I see they are happy, I feel happy, too．I think that being a volunteer is great!

　　评分标准：

　　第一档：(13～15分)

　　完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚且积极向上，内容丰富。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。

　　第二档：(9～12分)

　　基本符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

　　第三档：(5～8分)

　　部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。

　　第四档：(0～4分)

　　与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。