Question

5．假如你的邻居李涛即将升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的学习和生活，请你写一篇英语短文告诉他相关情况，文章要包括以下提示内容并可适当发挥，首句已给出．词数：80-100词左右．
提示：1、学习方法上的建议
2、与老师同学融洽相处
3、与父母之间理解沟通．
I'm glad to share something with you．I think it's the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class．It's not necessary to do too many exercises．We should try to find the right method to solve them．We can collect the problems we haven't worked out correctly．Go over them at times．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．
We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy．Try to be more active and help each other．We'd better not argue with our parents when we're in disagreement．Have a talk with them．We should help them do housework after school．Don't spend too much time on the Internet．It's not good for our health．Good luck!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写信告诉你的邻居你的初中的学习和生活，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1、学习方法上的建议
2、与老师同学融洽相处
3、与父母之间理解沟通．
常用到的重点短语：
try to do sth尽力做某事
work out 解答出
go over 复习
get on with sb 与某人相处
had better do sth 最好做某事
spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
be good for 对…有益
【高分句型】
1．We can collect the problems①we haven't②worked out correctly．
①定语从句，先行词是problems，关系词是which/that，做从句的宾语省略．
2．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．
the+比较级，the+比较级，表示越…，就越…．是一个复合句，其中前面的句子是状语从句，后面的句子是主句．

解答 I'm glad to share something with you． I think it's the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class．It's not necessary to do too many exercises．We should try to find the right method to solve them．We can collect the problems we haven't worked out correctly．【高分句型】Go over them at times．The harder you work，the better grades you will get．【高分句型】（学习方法上的建议）
We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy．Try to be more active and help each other．（与老师同学融洽相处）We'd better not argue with our parents when we're in disagreement．Have a talk with them．We should help them do housework after school．（与父母之间理解沟通）Don't spend too much time on the Internet．It's not good for our health．Good luck!

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．