Question

17．每年5月31日是世界无烟日，请结合下面所给要点，以"Saying No to Smoking"为题，谈谈吸烟的危害．
要点：1．吸烟有害健康，能导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
2．吸烟不但浪费钱还污染环境；
3．二手烟同样有害；
4．你的态度：面对别人吸烟怎么办？
参考词汇：
lung cancer肺癌；secondhand smoke二手烟； cause引起；waste浪费；harm有害；pollute污染
Saying No to Smoking
Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．
Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．Second，smokingpollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．
I hate smoking．But my father is a heavy smoker．He used to smoke five cigarettes a day，and he even made himself sick．Now，with the help of my mother，he has given up smoking．Fortunately，he is now healthierthan before．
All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will bemore beautiful!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"Saying No to Smoking"为题，谈谈吸烟的危害．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．吸烟有害健康，能导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
2．吸烟不但浪费钱还污染环境；
3．二手烟同样有害；
4．你的态度：面对别人吸烟怎么办？
常用到的重点短语：
even though 即使
be bad for 对…不利
do harm to 对…有害
keep away from 远离
try to do sth 尽力做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still ②enjoy smoking．
①even though 即使，引导让步状语从句．
②enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事
2．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词should，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．

解答 Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．【高分句型】
    Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．（吸烟有害健康，能导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病）Second，smoking pollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．（吸烟不但浪费钱还污染环境）
    Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well．（二手烟同样有害）So we must do something to keep away from smoking．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．【高分句型】And if anyone smokes nearby，we should try to stop it．From now on，every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking．（面对别人吸烟怎么办）
  All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will be more beautiful!

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．