Question

【题目】作文

假如你是Li Ming，从你与笔友Max的多年了解中，以”My pen friend Max”为题向全校师生介绍他的情况(如下表)。

基本情况	Max一所男女混合学校的八年级学生，校“All-star”俱乐部成员之一
外貌	长腿…，戴着眼镜(神气)…
个性(举例)	幽默感…，乐于助人…
兴趣爱好	喜欢DIY，闲暇时喜欢自己修理装饰东西，但常犯错。
学习生活	每门课程都有月考，觉得学习语言乐趣大，并且坚持用英语写作。
烦恼	无足够时间玩…，发现物理难学。
希望	有更多时间进行…，每月去一次世界公园看…，选修一门DIY课程。

Answer 1

【答案】

My pen friend Max

Max is a student of a mixed school of Eight Grade.He is a member of the school "All-star" club.He has long legs ,he runs very fast.He always wears glasses. He has a sense of humor.And he is ready to help others.His friends like him very much.He likes to decorate the things in your spare time, but he often makes mistakes.

Every course of the exam, learning language is fun,And he insists on writing in English.He failed to make a sandwich last term.He doesn’t have enough time to play.He finds it hard to learn physics.He hopes to have more time for drawing pictures.He wants to go to the world park once a month.And he wants to take a DIY course.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容介绍笔友的年龄外貌性格品质，学习生活，烦恼及梦想。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。因为内容提示比较多，必须认真查验是否有漏写情况。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了but，and,等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: be ready to , fail to do , in your spare time等。