Question

【题目】KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO!

Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor(编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE.

We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say.

We want to hear from you.

Here is a topic you might have an opinion about...

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Kids and Learning

All kids want to be good at learning. __________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Kids and Learning

All kids want to be good at learning. Some children are good at learning, but some children are good at playing, and they are not good at learning, why? This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying.

First, just as the saying goes ＂All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy＂, a good learner should know to play properly, if he or she plays happily, he will try to learning well. Besides, all learning decrease the interest of study. Second, students should make a proper time list, and try to follow the list. Last, parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study. All in all, only when we balance the relation between playing and learning, can we be good at learning.

As a middle school student, I think we should read more books. Reading is good for our physical and mental health.

Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.

【解析】1. 这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于kids and learning的作文，这需要我们根据提示信息，并写图画作文时，我们最好不要遗漏图画所给的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意语句的连贯与衔接。发挥我们的思维力和创造力，对这些内容逐一陈述。

2. 由题目可知，写这篇作文应用第三人称，时态为一般现在时。

3. 内容包括：第一部分阐述观点，孩子是否擅长学习；第二部分，孩子应如何处理好学习与玩之间的关系。

4. 运用重要的短语和句型：

be good at擅长

just as a saying goes正如谚语所说

have a good knowledge of对……有个很好的了解

All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning总之，只有处理好了学习与玩耍的关系才能学习好 only when…can we…只有当…我们才会…倒装句型

Just as the saying goes "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 just as 正如…；适当引用谚语会得高分

5. 行文要注意简化，不要抱沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够得分，同时注意写作文时使用一定的连接词，比如，what's more；last， but等等。

6. 写作文完成时要注意检查修改，以避免遗漏，如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分。最后，注意去使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯流畅，方能成就一篇好作文。