Question

最近的一项研究调查表明，大约20%的学生有不吃早饭的习惯。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。

原?? 因	1. 晚上学习太晚，想多睡一会儿而不吃早饭；
2. 家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；
3. 一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏，一些女生想保持苗条不吃早饭。
后?? 果	1. 上课无精打采，成绩下降；
2. 身体越来越差……
你的建议	？（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）

???? 注意：词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）

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Answer 1

【答案】

A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast. Also their parents are too busy to look after them and so they just give some money to their children to buy food themselves. But some boys use the money to play computer games and some girls just want to keep slim without having breakfast. As a result, some students have no energy in class. They have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier. I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport. So we should have breakfast every day.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：20％of the students， 20％的学生，have a bad habit of not having breakfast，有一个不吃早餐的坏习惯，sleep more instead of having breakfast.多睡代替吃早餐，too busy to look after them ，太忙没时间照顾他们， keep slim without having breakfast，不吃早餐来保持苗条等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：给材料作文。