Question

现在,人们过上了很好的生活，中学生们也更加注意自己的衣着。他们对购买衣服有自己的观点。请根据以下提示写一篇文章，可以适当进行拓展。

一些中学生的观点（同意）	平常穿校服，看起来... 学生应该以学习为重 能为父母省钱
另一些中学生的观点（不同意）	学生应该时尚的, 流行的 学生应该与众不同的 校服质量(quality)不好，不好看
我的看法	…

要求：1.语句通顺,书写规范,文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

      2.文章必须包括所有提示的要点,可适当发挥。

      3.词数不少于80词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Nowadays, people live a better life. And middle school students are more careful about the way they look.       

                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                               

                                                                             

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays, people live a better life. And middle school students are more careful about the way they look.

But in many middle schools, the students have to wear school uniforms. And this rule causes a hot debate among students.

Some students are in favor of the rule. They think the uniforms make the students look more active and energetic. If students can be allowed to wear their own clothes, they may spend more time and energy on choosing clothes. Students should concentrate on studying. Besides, the uniforms are cheap, and they can save money for parents.

On the contrary, there are a lot of students against the rule. First of all, they think uniforms are ugly. But they are young and they have the right to have the popular and fashion clothes. Uniforms make all the students look the same. But everyone should be different from the others. What’s more, the quality of uniforms is not good enough. So they think students should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。写作时，要围绕中心，理清思绪，不要漏掉重要信息。注意句子的完整性，以及句子之间的衔接，恰当的使用连词，使行文更流畅。在表达观点时，可使用不同的词汇进行表达。可适当使用一些从句，但注意其准确性。

【亮点分析】

文章结构完整，充分利用了所给材料，行文流畅。文章中有很多出色的短语和句式，如：have to不得不；in favor of支持；concentrate on专注于；On the contrary相反的；First of all首先；What’s more,除此之外。文中也用了一些连词，如if, but, so, and等，使文章逻辑思维更强。

考点：提纲作文。