Question

【题目】书面表达。

请根据下面的提示写一篇60-80词的短文。要点如下：

你的朋友Jack 长时间玩电脑游戏；

他现在经常头痛，眼睛不舒服，后背及颈酸痛，并且睡不好觉；

请你从睡眠，运动，饮食等方面给他提出合理化建议。

参考词汇：电脑游戏 computer game 经常头痛 have lots of headaches 背痛 have a sore back

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. You say that you have a headache. You have sore eyes. You have a sore back. And you don’t sleep well at night. I hear that you played computer games too much. That’s probably why you are not feeling well. I think you should take breaks away from the computer. You shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. You should do eyes exercises to relax your eyes every day. And you should get lots of exercises. You shouldn’t sit in the same way for too long without playing sports.

I hope you will be better soon.

Yours,

Jim

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，吉姆写信给他的好朋友杰克，给他一些照顾好自己的身体的建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：you don’t…；I think… You should…及You shouldn’t…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要祝愿他的身体很快恢复。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头说了杰克现在的身体问题，接下来给他一些建议，最后希望他的身体尽快恢复。此处用了have a headache，too much， do eyes exercises，in the same way等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。