Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题；满分20分）

请以“我的理想中的学校 ”为题写一篇80词左右的短文. 要点如下：

⑴ 每天上午8：00上课，下午4：00结束。有足够的时间进行课外活动 ，每天只有半小时的作业。

⑵ 在学校餐厅(dining hall)吃午饭，可以选择食物吃。

⑶ 老师很幽默，经常给我们讲笑话。

⑷ 有一个很大的图书馆，里面有许多有用的书，经常可以借书看

⑸周末有较多的空闲时间， 可以经常进行学校校游。总是玩得很开心。

My Ideal School

Answer 1

【答案】

My Ideal School

My ideal school starts at 8a.m. and finishes at 4p.m. every day. We have enough time for after-school activities. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We have lunch at the school dining hall. We can choose food to eat. Our teachers are very humorous and often tell us funny jokes. There is a big library with a lot of useful books in it. We can borrow books to read. We have lots of free time at the weekend. We can often go on a school trip. We always have a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如We have enough time for after-school activities. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We have lunch at the school dining hall. We can choose food to eat. Our teachers are very humorous and often tell us funny jokes.等等。