Question

假如你们班要举行以“Caring about health”为题的主题班会，请根据以下内容提示，并结合自己的亲身体会，写一篇80词左右的英语发言稿，谈谈你的看法。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
保持健康的意义；
自己以前身体很虚弱，经常生病不能上学；
现在通过锻炼，身体变得强壮有力；
保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手。
Caring about health
Boys and girls，
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Thank you

Answer 1

Caring about health
Boys and girls，
Health is the most important thing to everybody; wealth is the most valuable treasure to everybody. Without health,we can have nothing to talk about.
Looking back on my past, I was in poor health for about two years. My life was in the darkness. Sometimes I was too seriously ill to go to school. I could just play games for at most ten minutes. After that, I was told to exercise as much as possible in order to be in good health . It  really works. Now, I’m strong and powerful.
How to be healthy? There’s no secret. But first of all, you must eat more vegetables and do sports about at least one hour every day. At the same time ,you should go to bed early and sleep early. Last but not least, don’t forget to wash hands often, before eating, after going to the restroom …
Please remember my tips, then you will live a healthy life!
Thanks for your listening.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。形式上是一篇发言稿，但开头和结尾已经给出，不是障碍。另外，本文所给材料比较明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达。根据材料内容可知本文主语是第一人称，在写作时注意时态及主谓一致问题，因为本文有对过去的回顾及与现在的对比。同时，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，是文章锦上添花也是必不可少的。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的连词，使文章结构紧凑，开篇一段三句话道出了健康的重要性，前两句Health is the most important thing to everybody; wealth is the most valuable treasure to everybody.排比，言简有力。第二段分词短语作状语开头，新鲜有力，吸引读者眼球，一些不常用词或短语looking back on my past, at most, seriously, in order to, works,使文章增色不少。尾端也是娓娓道来，At the same time， Last but not least, 使所叙语言如小河流水，不急不缓，顺理成章。总之，本文在语言表达上不失为一篇逻辑性和条理性都很强的一篇好文章.