Question

假如你叫Helen，请以My family为题，根据以下提示信息介绍她的家庭状况。
可以适当发挥，词数不少于40。

Family member	Job	Age	Favourite food
Helen	student	12	hamburger
Her father	doctor	36	noodles
Her mother	English teacher	37	meat

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Answer 1

One possible version:
Hello, my name is Helen. There are three people in my family. My father is 36 years old. He is a doctor in a hospital. He likes noodles very much. My mother is an English teacher. She is 37. Her favourite food is meat. I am twelve years old. I am a student in a middle school. Hamburger is my favourite food.I love my family!

试题分析：：本题是写一篇以我的家庭为话题的书面表达，根据表格我们可以从家庭所包含的成员，每个成员的身份，年龄，职业，爱好等方面加以介绍，介绍家人时应注意单数第三人称的正确使用，在完成本写作时，应注重语言的准确性，时态的正确性和结构的条理性，同时也可以使用there be的句型，应该避免使用错词，错句和错时态。
点评：在介绍某个范围内有某物可用there be的句型，在介绍家庭的成员所存在的情况，为一般情况，应该注意用一般现在时，尤其注意单数第三人称的使用。同时我们在写作时也要注意语言的通顺性和连贯性，单词和句子的正确性，尽量使用自己会的语言，提高写作的质量。