Question

16．生活中，每个人都有自己的心爱之物．你们学校的英语专栏将要刊登题为"我的心爱之物"的文章，请你撰稿，内容包括你最喜欢的东西是什么，它是什么样子的，你为什么喜欢它．
提示词语：beautiful，meaningful，useful，remind，memory
提示问题：?What is your favorite thing？
?What is it like？
?Why do you like it？
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
However，when it comes to my favorite thing，a phone album comes into mind immediately．
然而，当提到我最喜欢的，一个手机相册立刻涌上心头．
when it comes to 当提到…，come into mind 涌上心头．
【高分句型二】
 It  often reminds me of all the happiness I have had．
它总是让我想起我所拥有的所有的快乐．
remaind sb of sth 让某人想起…
I have had是省略了关系词that的定语从句，修饰前面的happiness，关系词做宾语，故省略．

解答 We get so many wonderful things in our life，some are beautiful，others are useful．However，when it comes to my favorite thing，a phone album comes into mind immediately．【高分句型一】（心爱之物是什么） It is a very beautiful one with all kinds of phones of mine at all ages，（什么样子的） from the moment I had my first baby step to the colorful life when I was in kindergarten； from the time I was with my friends to the precious holidays I spent with my family．My mother gave it to me as a gift for my 14^th birthday．I fell in love with it at first sight because it's more than just a photo album，it is a record of my childhood，holding so much love and beautiful memories．It often reminds me of all the happiness I have had．【高分句型二】Every time I go through the photos，I feel warm and joyful．（为什么喜欢） It is my treasure forever．

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