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14．Life is just like a mirror，you smile at it，and it smiles at you，too．请你以"Learn to Smile"为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇60词以上的文章（文章开头已给出）．

学会对自己微笑	1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）． 2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己． 3、有益于身心健康．
学会对他人微笑	1、便于与他人之间的交流． 2、给别人带来快乐，自己也快乐．
微笑是一种语言	人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离．

1．参考词汇：误解 misunderstand 自信confident 交流 communicate
2．短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺．
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife，the first sentence of it is"Just a smile and the rain is gone．"Do you like smiling？I think you should learn to smile．
Doyoulikesmiling？Smileiscommoninourlives，butitisalsoveryimportanttousbecauseithasmagicpower．Ithinkweshouldlearntosmile．
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．And smile can also keep you healthy．
Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．
Third，Smiling at life is a style to live，is important to our development，makes us confident and be a happier life．
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以Learn to Smile为题谈谈学会微笑的意义．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称和第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．学会对自己微笑．面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）．使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己．有益于身心健康．
2．学会对他人微笑．便于与他人之间的交流．给别人带来快乐，自己也快乐．
3．微笑是一种语言．人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离．
常用到的重点短语：
smile at sb 对某人微笑
keep healthy 保持健康
make sb/sth+adj  让…怎么样
belong to 属于
between …and…两者之间
【高分句型】
1．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．
if引导的条件状语从句．
2．Sometimes the one ①who beats you is not others，②but yourself．
①who是关系代词，定语从句修饰先行词the one．who作为从句的主语．
②but表示而是，与前面的not，构成not…but …不是…而是…
3．①In a word，smile is a kind of language②belonging to everyone．
①in a word 总之
②动名词短语做后置定语，修饰前面的名词language

解答 Learn to Smile
Do you like smiling？Smile is common in our lives，but it is also very important to us because it has magic power．I think we should learn to smile．
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．【高分句型】Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．【高分句型】And smile can also keep you healthy．（学会对自己微笑）
Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．（学会对自己微笑）
 Third，Smiling at life is a style to live，is important to our development，makes us confident and be a happier life．（学会对生活微笑）
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．【高分句型】It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．（微笑是一种语言）

点评 提纲作文注意：
1．仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．
2．提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，
   按照一定逻辑关系来写．
3．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．