Question

11．假设Mike是你的朋友．请根据以下提示，介绍一下Mike．

姓名	Mike
年龄	13
生日	10月25号
不喜欢的食物及原因	冰淇淋（不健康）
最喜欢的科目及原因	美术（简单）
爱好	画画和弹吉他等

要求：①必须包含表格中所有内容，可以适当发挥．
②注意书写干净、整洁．
③文中不要出现真实姓名和班级．
Mike is my friend．He is 13．His birthday is on October 25th．He doesn't like ice-cream because it's not healthy．His favorite subject is art because it's easy．And he likes drawing and playing the guitar．I like to be friends with him．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He doesn't like ice-cream because it's not healthy她不喜欢冰淇淋因为不健康．
because引导的原因状语从句
【高分句型二】
And he likes drawing and playing the guitar他喜欢画画和弹钢琴．
like doing sth 喜欢做某事

解答 Mike is my friend．He is 13．His birthday is on October 25th．（姓名年龄生日）He doesn't like ice-cream because it's not healthy．【高分句型一】（不喜欢的食物及原因）His favorite subject is art because it's easy．（最喜欢的科目及原因）And he likes drawing and playing the guitar【高分句型二】（爱好）I like to be friends with him．

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．