Question

随着年龄的增长，我们所学知识的广度在扩大，深度在加深，作业量也会增大。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Our homework为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

	作业	影响
以 前	1.作业量少； 2.题目容易	有时间进行自己的爱好、……
现 在	1. 作业量大； 2. 题目较难；	没有充足的时间进行自己的爱好、……
我认为……

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；  

       2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 

3）词数：100词左右（正文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Our homework

     As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Our homework

As we grow, what we learn is more and more difficult and we have more and more homework.

In the past, we had a little homework and it was easy. we had much time for my hobbies and we could sleep well.

However, at present we have too much homework to do. It is also very hard and takes us too much time. we don’t have enough time for our hobbies and sleep. we often feel tired in class.

In my opinion, homework is very useful for us to practice what we are learning. I will plan my time more carefully so that I can finish my homework on time and have enough time to sleep. At the same time, I can have some time for one of my hobbies one day.

【解析】

试题分析： 考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】本文出现一些固定短语In the past在过去， too much很多， In my opinion在我看来， At the same time同时， so that因此，at present目前。It is also very hard and takes us too much time考查 it take sb some time to do 花费时间做某事。In my opinion, homework is very useful for us to practice what we are learning 这句话中提到 be useful for sb to do ,做某事对某人来说是有用的，还出现的由what引导的宾语从句。

考点：提纲类作文。