Question

3．你校与英国某中学结成姊妹学校，英方校刊编辑（Ann）来信了解你校的课外活动情况及你们的建议，请你根据下面提供的内容用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
生词：兴趣小组 interest group   活动 activity
活动时间：4：50-5：50
主要内容：（1）体育类：篮球、足球；
（2）兴趣小组活动：绘画 歌舞 电脑等；
（3）英语角 （周三下午）．
建议：（1）增加课外活动时间；
（2）减少作业量．
Dear Ann，
I'like to tell you something about the out-of-class activity in our school．We usuallyhave activities from 4：50-5：50 in the afternoon．We have different kinds of activities．Some students are interested in sports．They play basketball and football．We also have some special interest groups，such as drawing，singing and dancing．And now，The computer games are the most popular．On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner．We like speaking English there．We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是向英国某中学介绍你校的课外活动情况及你们的建议．注意信的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1活动时间：4：50-5：50
2主要内容：（1）体育类：篮球、足球；
（2）兴趣小组活动：绘画 歌舞 电脑等；
（3）英语角 （周三下午）．
常用到的重点短语：
different kinds of不同种类
such as 例如
be interested in对…感兴趣
like doing sth 喜欢做某事
hope to do sth 希望去做某事
spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
【高分句型】
1．And now，the computer games are the most popular．
最高级的运用．
2．We ①hope to ②spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．
①hope to do sth 希望去做某事
②spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事

解答 Dear Ann，
I'like to tell you something about the out-of-class activity in our school．We usually have activities from 4：50-5：50 in the afternoon．（活动时间）We have different kinds of activities．Some students are interested in sports．They play basketball and football．（体育类）We also have some special interest groups，such as drawing，singing and dancing．And now，the computer games are the most popular．【高分句型】（兴趣小组活动）On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner．We like speaking English there．（英语角）We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework．【高分句型】（建议）

点评 给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点．写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯．
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多．写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑．