Question

假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies（爱好）”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一份发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。

提示：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies?

(2) What’s your reason for not talking about lucky money?

要求：（1）发言稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）词数：60~80。

参考词汇: one’s own hobby, a proper topic(合适的话题), personal, unhappy

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobby, like playing ball games, listening to music, drawing and so on. It can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about it.

Lucky money, however, isn’t a proper topic for us, because it’s too personal. What’s more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.

So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为简略。动笔前应先要阅读材料，读懂提示中涉及的问题。写作中注意将自己的观点和理由介绍清楚。根据材料内容可知本文涉及过去现在和将来三种时态的表达，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。写作中注意在表达观点时，一些常见句式的应用，注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。