Question

2014年马上就要到了，网上就“是否该恢复7天长假”的问题讨论得如火如荼，你（Jason）和你的网友 Peter 也展开了讨论。请你根据正文和反方观点，并结合自己的看法，给 Peter 写一封E-mail，开头和结尾部分已给出（字数80左右，不包括已给开头和结尾）

Agree：The long holiday should be canceled（取消）	Disagree： We need a 7-day holiday
too crowded   too many cars on the highway/ cause accidents    be bad for environment   …	have a good rest   family can get together   go traveling . . …
Y my opinion：

Dear Peter,

   How is everything going? 2014 is coming. It seems that every one is talking about whether we should have the 7-day holiday these days. Some people think that                                   

                                                                                              

                                                                                             

                                                                                             

                                                                                              

                                                                                             

                                                                                             

                                                                                              

                                                                                             

                                                                                             

                                                                                             

                                                                                             

                                                                                       

    What’s your idea? Could you write to tell me about it?

Yours,

                                                                                Jason

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

Dear Peter,

      How is everything going? It seems that everyone is talking about whether we should have the 7-day holiday these days. Some people think that many places are too crowded during the holiday, especially the shops, the supermarkets and the places of interest. And there are too many cars on the highway and it will cause a lot of traffic accidents. What’s worse, it is bad for our environment, because too many cars will cause air pollution and if people throw rubbish, they will pollute the environment.

      However, other people don’t agree. They think if they have a long holiday, they can have a good rest after long time of working. Besides, family can get together. Last, they can go travelling to places they like.

      I think it is good to have a 7-day holiday. We can stay with our family, read some books or go to movies. If we want to travel, we can ride bikes to the nearby places. That’s a better way than travelling by car.

      What’s your idea? Could you write to tell me about it ?

                                                                            Yours,                                                        

                                                                             Jason

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍是否恢复七天长假进行了正反方的讨论，并给出自己的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Some people think that......，it is bad for……， it is good to……，及They think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己选择适合自己的运动的理由。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了反对恢复七天长假的理由，接下来支持恢复七天长假的原因，最后指出自己的观点。此处用了talking about，the places of interest. get together. stay with 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。