Question

17．据中国互联网信息中心数据统计，中国网民中66%是青少年．人们对于学生上网持不同意见．请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍人们的不同观点，同时发表自己个人的看法．

赞成的理由		反对的理由
1．广交朋友，自由表达思想．		1．浪费时间，影响健康．
2．了解更多背景信息，拓宽视野．		2．容易受骗，不利于学习．
3．…		3．…
个人看法	…

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数．
4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等．
It's reported that 66%of Chinese"netizens （网民）"are teenagers by the China Internet Network Information Centre．Different people have different opinions．
Some people say yes．The internet helps make many friends．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．And some people said surfing on the Internet can learn more background information and open up their eyes．
Others，however，think students should not．They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．Besides，some students get cheated on line．What's worse，it is bad for your health．It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1赞成的理由1）广交朋友，自由表达思想；2）了解更多背景信息，拓宽视野 3）…
2反对的理由1）浪费时间，影响健康；2）容易受骗，不利于学习；3）…
3你的看法
常用到的重点短语：
 make friends 交朋友
a waste of 浪费
spend 时间 on sth  花时间做某事
get cheated 受骗
【高分句型】
1．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．
Chatting on line动名词短语做方式状语．
2．They say ①making friends on line is a waste of time，②which should be spent more meaningfully on study．
①say后是省略了that的宾语从句，动名词短语making friends on line做主语，谓语动词用单数is．a waste of 浪费
②which作为关系词的非限制性定语从句，which 作为主语，修饰先行词time．
3．It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．
it是形式主语，that从句作为真正主语，

解答 It's reported that 66%of Chinese"netizens （网民）"are teenagers by the China Internet Network Information Centre．Different people have different opinions．Some people say yes．The internet helps make many friends．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．【高分句型】And some people said surfing on the Internet can learn more background information and open up their eyes．（赞成的理由）
Others，however，think students should not．They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．【高分句型】So，it will get in the way of schoolwork．Besides，some students get cheated on line．What's worse，it is bad for health．（反对的理由）
It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．【高分句型】As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us．（我的看法）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．