Question

20．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Tony来信询问你的周末的情况，请根据以下提示内容给他回信．
1．周末不上课，但必须完成家庭作业；
2．帮父母做一些家务、看看电视、上上网等；
3．上周末和朋友们去郊外玩：做游戏，野餐，拍了很多照片；
注意：字数80左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to get your letter．You asked me about my life on weekends．Now let me tell you something about it．
I don't have any classes on weekends，but I usually spend some time doing my homework at home．After that，I often help my parents do some housework for one or two hours．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online to read some news or do some reading in order to open up my eyes．
Last weekend，I went to a countryside with some of my friends．We played some games，and we had a picnic，at same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是给笔友回信说说周末的情况．注意信件格式，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．周末不上课，但必须完成家庭作业；
2．帮父母做一些家务、看看电视、上上网等；
3．上周末和朋友们去郊外玩：做游戏，野餐，拍了很多照片；
常用到的重点短语：
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
in order to 为了…
open up 开阔
take pictures照相
at the same time同时

【高分句型】
1．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online ①to read some news or ②do some reading ③in order to ④open up my eyes．
①动词不定式做目的状语．
②do+some+doing（动名词），表示一种动作．
③in order to 为了…，做目的状语．
④open up 开阔．
2．We①played some games，and we had a picnic，②at the same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．
①本句是一系列的动作，play games玩游戏，have a picnic野餐，take pictures照相，have a good time玩得开心．
②at the same time同时．

解答 Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to get your letter．You asked me about my life on weekends．Now let me tell you something about it．
I don't have any classes on weekends，but I have to spend some time doing my homework at home．（周末不上课，但必须完成家庭作业）After that，I often help my parents do some housework for one or two hours．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online to read some news or do some reading in order to open up my eyes．【高分句型】（帮父母做一些家务、看看电视、上上网等）
Last weekend，I went to a countryside with some of my friends．We played some games，and we had a picnic，at the same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．【高分句型】（上周末和朋友们去郊外玩：做游戏，野餐，拍了很多照片；）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．