Question

16．假如你是李涛，在美国夏令营活动中，你和来自不同国家的中学生交流了各自的职业梦想．现校刊向你约稿，请根据表格信息，给校刊主编回信．

name	what	why
David（U．K．）	artist	1．creative 2．love painting
Helen（ U．S．A）	shop assistant	1．try on new clothes 2．meet different people
Li Tao	…	1．… 2．…．

注意：1．内容必须包括表格中的信息；
2．开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；
3．词数：70个左右．开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词汇．
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about our dreams．      ．
ooking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Tao．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍一下你和你的朋友David、Helen的职业梦想．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．David（U．K．）；艺术家；原因：有创造性，喜欢绘画
2．Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；原因：试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友
3．李涛的梦想和理由
常用到的重点短语：
want to be 想成为
make+sth+adj 让某某怎样
try on 试穿
come from 来自
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．David①from U．K．②wants to be an artist ③because he loves painting and④it's creative to⑤make the city more beautiful．
①介词短语做后置定语修饰David．
②want to be 想成为
③because引导的原因状语从句．
④it作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
⑤make+sth+adj 让某某怎样
2．She ①would like to be a shop assistant ②because she will enjoy the life③if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people．
①would like to be 想成为
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③if引导的条件状语从句．遵循主将从现的规则．
3．I like playing computer games and ①doing programs can②make me feel③how smart I am．
①动名词短语做主语．
②make sb do sth 让某人做某事
③how smart I am作为feel的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about our dreams．
David from U．K．wants to be an artist because he loves painting and it's creative to make the city more beautiful．【高分句型】（David（U．K．）；艺术家；有创造性，喜欢绘画）As for the American girl Helen，she has a very special dream．She would like to be a shop assistant because she will enjoy the life if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people．【高分句型】（Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友）
I come from China and I want to work as a programmer．I like playing computer games and doing programs can make me feel how smart I am．【高分句型】（我来自中国，程序员，喜欢电脑游戏）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Tao

点评 此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依