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3．同学们，请根据以下内容，写一写Ann 和Anna这一对可爱的双胞胎姐妹吧！注意：所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥．70-80词．

Ann 和Anna 一样高，她们都留着长直发，Anna比Ann外向，Ann 喜欢阅读，但Anna喜欢看动作片．Ann的成绩比Anna好．Ann 和Anna都很健康，因为她们每天都锻炼，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且从不吃垃圾食品．上周六，她们和同学们一起骑车去人民公园（the People's Park）玩，上午做游戏，下午拍很多照片，玩得很开心．
Ann and Anna are twin sisters．                                           

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
They are both healthy because they exercise every day．  他们都很健康，因为他们每天都锻炼．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．  
   高分句型二
 they rode bikes to the People's Park to have fun with our classmates．  他们骑着自行车去人民公园和同学们一起玩．ride bike 骑自行车．have fun with sb．和某人一起玩．

解答 Ann and Anna are twin sisters．Ann is as tall as Anna．They both have long straight hair．Anna is more outgoing than Ann．【要点一，双胞胎姐妹的外貌】Ann likes reading，but Anna enjoys watching action movies．Ann studies harder than Anna．So Ann always gets better grades than Anna．They are both healthy because they exercise every day【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．They eat vegetables four or five times a week．And they never eat junk food．【要点二，双胞胎姐妹的生活习惯】
     Last Saturday，they rode bikes to the People's Park to have fun with our classmates【高分句型二，注意固定词组的使用】．In the morning，they played games．In the afternoon，they took a lot of photos．They had a good time．【要点三，上周六的行程】

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