Question

7．20年后你的生活是怎样的呢？请围绕未来生活的衣食住行进行想象．
要求：1利用下面的思维导图，可以适当的发挥，不得少于80个字．
     2 意思连贯，想象合理．

My Life in 20 Years 
                                                                                                                                                                    

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think I'll be a newspaper reporter我想我会意识一名报纸记者．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
I'll live in Shanghai，because there will be more jobs in that city．我会住在上海，因为那所城市有更多的工作．
because引导的原因状语从句

解答 In 20 years，I think I'll be a newspaper reporter（工作）．【高分句型一】I'll live in Shanghai，because there will be more jobs in that city．【高分句型二】I'll have a big family．（家庭）And my apartment will be very big，too．Because I want to live with my parents and my grandparents．（房子）And I'll probably  keep a dog，I like animals．During the week，I'll work every day．On the weekend，I'll go camping with my friends．In the future，I'll take a  holiday in Hong Kong．One day，I'll even go to Australia．（假期） I think my future will be wonderful，so I must work hard．And I can do it!

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．