Question

【题目】假如你是Henry，你的笔友李华在英语学习中遇到了困难．请根据提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，就如何应对这些英语学习上的困难，谈谈你的做法和想法．词数80词左右．

注意事项：

1．必须包含上面所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名．

参考词汇：imitate模仿 audio音频

Dear Li Hua，

I am glad that you are interested in learning English． But I'm sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in learning English.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

There are many ways to learn English， but you should have your own way．

Yours，

Henry

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua，

I am glad that you are interested in learning English． But I'm sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in learning English． For example， it's hard for you to remember words． You aren't good at listening and often make mistakes in grammar． You read slowly． I find some ways to improve my English． Maybe they can help you．

I copy down new words and keep reading them whenever I'm free． I read after audios and imitate the tones． I often read grammar books， borrow English newspapers and magazines and read them after class． Listen carefully and take notes in class． Practice makes perfect． So it's important to practice every day． Use English as much as possible．

There are many ways to learn English，but you should have your own way．

Yours，

Henry

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be interested in，be sorry to，for example，be good at，make mistakes，copy down，keep doing，after class，as much as possible，have your own way等。而并列句You aren't good at listening and often make mistakes in grammar / Listen carefully and take notes in class/ There are many ways to learn English，but you should have your own way和But I'm sorry to hear that you have some difficulties in learning English / I copy down new words and keep reading them whenever I'm free等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。