Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Millie, 今年13岁，请根据以下提示向同学们介绍你的生活方式

Lifestyle	Exercise	dance, swim, play football/ basketball/volleyball…
	Breakfast	egg, bread, milk
	Lunch	meat, fish, vegetables…
	Dinner	have soup, fruit, vegetables…
	drink lots of water, have enough sleep, keep happy every day

要求：句意连贯，语法正确，要点齐全，书写认真．可适当发挥，词数80词左右．

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Millie. I am 13. I have a healthy lifestyle. I like to do exercise. And I dance and swim twice a week. I usually play football, basketball and volleyball after school. For breakfast, I have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I have little meat, fish and much vegetables. For dinner, I have soup and eat some fruit, such as apples, bananas, oranges. And I have some vegetables. In the day, I like to drink lots of water. In the evening, I have enough sleep. So this helps me keep healthy everyday.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以Millie的名字介绍自己的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is…，I like to...，I have...，So this helps me...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意利用提纲中所列词汇，组成完整通顺的句子。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍我有一个健康的生活方式，接下来介绍我的锻炼，饮食，最后指出这些东西有利于保持健康。此处like to do sth, twice a week, play football, after school, for lunch, such as, help sb do sth, keep healthy等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。