Question

鲁迅是一位伟大的作家。请你用所给提示词及对鲁迅的认识，以“My favorite writer”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英文短文。

提示：tall, short hair, wise, known, a fighter with his pen, young people, influence, thought

My favorite writer

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

                               My favorite writer

There are many famous writers in the world. And my favorite is Lu Xun. He was a tall man with short hair. He wrote many articles and books in his life. And he was known as a fighter with his pen. Now many young people are still influenced by his thoughts. As a student, I will work hard and become a great writer like him.

【解析】

试题分析：此文是一篇记叙文，主要介绍鲁迅先生是我最喜爱的作家，根据所给单词的提示可知主要让介绍他的外貌，他的重要贡献和对后人的影响。所给的提示词在文章中都要出现，并不能出现较大的语法错误，前后语句要连贯，句意完整通顺。

【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。

考点：提纲作文。