Question

根据下列表格，介绍Mary 和Tom 做志愿者的情况。

name	Dream job	What do they do	Their feeling（感受）
Mary	护士	每个星期天到第一医院当志愿者。帮忙照顾生病的孩子。给孩子们唱歌或讲故事而让孩子们高兴起来。	感到快乐。在做自己喜欢事情的同时还能帮助别人。
Tom	体育老师	喜欢打篮球，在5岁的时候就会打篮球了。周末的时候到学校教孩子打球。	学到很多有关如何关心孩子，且在学校当志愿者能帮助他获得梦想中的工作。

Students who volunteer

Mary and Tom are my good friends. They are volunteers in our school. We should learn from them. They give up several hours each week to help others.

Mary……..

 

 

Tom………..

 

 

 

Answer 1

Students who volunteer

Mary and Tom are my good friends. They are volunteers in our school. We should learn from them. They give up several hours each week to help others.

Mary wants to be a nurse. She volunteers in No. 1 Hospital every Sunday. She helps to care for sick kids . she sings songs or tells stories to cheer them up. She feels happy. She can do what she loves to do and help others at the same time.

Tom’s dream job is to be a PE teacher. He likes playing basketball very much. He could play basketball at the age of 15. He goes to school to teach kids how to play basketball. He learns a lot about how to care for children. And volunteering there can help him to get his future dream job.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写玛丽和汤姆的梦想。全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如care for,cheer them up,at the same time, likes playing,at the age of,a lot，learns about等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句 what she loves to do and help others at the same time；不定式做宾语 to be a nurse；不定式做表语to be a PE teacher；疑问词加不定式做宾语how to play basketball，how to care for children；文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文