Question

书面表达： Life is just like a mirror（镜子） , you smile at it , and it smiles at you ,too.请以“Learn to smile ”为题写一篇文章

提示：1，学会对自己微笑

      2， 学会对他人微笑

      3， 微笑是一种语言

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Learn to smile

Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you，too. So we must learn to smile. You need to smile when you face to the trouble. If you were misunderstood or did badly in the exam, you can smile at yourself. Smile is a kind of encouragement. It can make you believe in yourself. The most important thing is that smile can make you have a good health.

     Smiling at others is easy. It can make anyone happy and it can bring the happiness to others. So do you. When your friends fail, your smile means "Have another try!"

     Smile is a kind of language which can't be heard by anyone, but persons who always know its meaning, So when you smile, although you don't say any word, you can get much. Let’s learn to smile often, I believe it can make the whole warm and you will get a happy life. 

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，题目为Learn to smile，学会微笑，要求我们从三个方面进行表达，即学会对自己微笑、学会对他人微笑、微笑是一种语言。我们的文章应该从这三个方面着手进行。写好这篇文章的关键是说明白我们为什么要学会微笑，微笑对自己，对他人，对这个世界有什么好处。同时我们还要注意表达的准确性。还要使用好的连接词和句型以使文意连贯，流畅。通过审题可知这篇文章应注意使用一般现在时表达，注意分段，使文章有层次。

【亮点说明】这篇范文书写规范，内容完整，层次分明。文章分成三段来进行阐述。第一段主要表达的是smile at yourself，对自己微笑；第二段是smile at others，对别人微笑；第三段是一个总结段，smile is a kind of language，微笑是一种语言，它可以给自己，给别人，给这个世界带来好处。文章注意使用不同的句型和排比句来增强文章的表现力，如You need to smile when you face to the trouble. If you were misunderstood or did bad in the exam, you can smile at yourself、So when you smile, although you don't say any word, you can get much、It can make anyone happy and it can bring the happiness to others等。整体表达流畅，有节奏。

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