Question

5．"平安出行，文明乘车"已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题．请你根据图表中所提示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文．
内容要点：

注意1．短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数；
2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；3．内容可适当发挥，并表达你个人的看法；
4．词数90左右．
How can we keep safe when we go out？First，we must obey the traffic rules，especially when we cross the road．Second，we are supposed to help children and we're expected to offer our seats to people in need．Third，we should be careful when we get on a bus．
While we are on a bus，we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around．Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．What's more，smoking is not allowed on the bus．
In short，as students we should not only keep safe when we go out，but also be ready to help others．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是针对"平安出行，文明乘车"根据图表内容写一篇作文．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．要注意上下文的衔接．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．遵循交通规则
2．给有需要的人让座
3．公共场所不随意吐痰．
4．不大声说话
5．个人看法

常用到的重点短语：
obey the rules 遵守规则
be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
expect to do sth 期待做某事
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
what's more 再者
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
高分句型：
1．Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．
这里是一个倒装句，neither放句首需引起倒装．
2．①In short，as students we should②not only keep safe ③when we go out，but also ③be ready to help others．
①in short简言之，总结上文．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分，这里是连接两个动词短语．
③when引导的时间状语从句．
④be ready to do sth准备好做某事，乐于做某事．

解答 How can we keep safe when we go out？（引出下文）First，we must obey the traffic rules，especially when we cross the road．（遵循交通规则）Second，we are supposed to help children and the old and we're expected to offer our seats to people in need．（给有需要的人让座）Third，we should be careful when we get on a bus．While we are on a bus，we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around．（公共场所不随意吐痰）Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．（高分句型）（．不大声说话）．What's more，smoking is not allowed on the bus．
In short，as students we should not only keep safe when we go out，but also be ready to help others．（高分句型）（我的看法）

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内．在自己的观点部分，考生需要自己适当的发挥，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．