Question

【题目】书面表达：

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。

要求：

(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受：

(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：词数80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Milk,

I’m glad to hear that you are interessted in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生态公民)，we did a good job. Last

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours．

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good iob. Last Sunday,I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they alsoknew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。