Question

【题目】假如你的朋友Jim要来北京，想让你提前给他介绍一下北京的名胜。请根据下列表格

内容写一篇介绍北京的文章（80词左右）。

	Beijing
特别之处	中国的首都 亚洲最具有活力的城市之一……
风景	故宫 颐和园 长城 ……
交通	公交车、地铁都很方便，打的花钱很多 ……
物价	物价很高 电脑很便宜 ……
语言	普通话 很多人说英语 ……
……	……

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I know that you are coming to Beijing for a visit ., I’m very glad to offer you some information about the city.

Beijing, with an area of 16,808 square kilometers, has a population of over 17 million. Beijing is the capital of China.It is one of most lively cities.There are a lot of places of interest for you to visit, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven, the Great Wall and so on. And it’s very convenient to go wherever you want to go by bus, by taxi or by subway. They are cheap.The prices of some things are high,but computers are cheap.We speak Chinese but most of people can speak English. Located in Chaoyang District, northeast of Beijing, the National Stadium is also called the Bird’s Nest, where the opening ceremony took place on August 8th , 2008.

I’m really looking forward to your coming here and I’m sure you will be deeply impressed by a new Beijing!
Best wishes,

Li hua

【解析】试题分析：拿到作文题目，首先要认真审题，根据表格内容用英语简单地介绍有关北京的一些基本情况。需要写的内容已经以表格的形式给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中be glad to do，the capital of, a lot of, and so on, but, look forward to,等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还使用了固定句型It’s very convenient to do sth., 宾语从句、定语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。