Question

【题目】书面表达

最近你的朋友Tom在他的微博上发了这样一个帖子：

These days, I feel my life is full of problems. I have so many rules in my home and school. I often argue with my parents about my hairstyle and my clothes. I failed my English exams last week. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school.

I want to make my school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?

These days, I feel my life is full of problems. I have so many rules in my home and school. I often argue with my parents about my hairstyle and my clothes. I failed my English exams last week. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school.

I want to make my school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?

假如你是Jim，请你给Tom回个帖子。根据中文大意和英文提示，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80词的短文。请不要写出你真实的校名和姓名。内容要求：

1. 针对Tom的几点困惑，先谈谈你的看法；

2. 为他提几条合理的建议；

Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw your problems in your weibo. I can understand you very well.

I hope my advice will help you, and you can enjoy your school life better.

Love,

Jim

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw your problems in your weibo. I can understand you very well.

Actually, I don’t mind the rules. They help us to be a better person. I think you have to understand them. I believe that it is not good to argue with our parents. But we should talk with them and try to make them know us well.

As for English, you should try to listen to your teacher carefully. You can do more listening and reading. Keeping diaries also helps your English writing.

I think what the teachers said is right. Only have we got enough knowledge we can serve for the society and have a good life in the future.

To make your life colorful, you can do some sports after class or join some clubs. I think they will bring you happiness.

I hope my advice will help you, and you can enjoy your school life better.

Love,

Jim

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，针对Tom的几点困惑，先谈谈我的看法；为他提几条合理的建议。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，I believe that……，you should……，You can……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。