Question

【题目】书面表达（共1小题，满分10分）

人民公园是人们放松休闲的好去处。请根据下表中人们以前和现在行为的变化，以“Behave well in our daily lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文，注意时态，适当使用被动语态，并谈谈自己的感受。

以前	现在
四处乱扔杂物	废物入箱，爱护环境
摘花毁树，伤害动物	保护植物，关爱动物
随处抽烟，乱涂乱画	人人禁烟，保护名胜

注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。

2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：行为 behave, v. behavior n.

扔垃圾 drop litter 垃圾箱 dustbin 毁坏 destroy

名胜 places of interest

Behave well in our daily lives

The People’s Park is a good place for people to relax .Every day many people come here to play and exercise .But a few years ago,

Answer 1

【答案】 Behave well in our daily lives

The People’s Park is a good place for people to relax. Every day many people come here to play and exercise.But a few years ago,a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often.Some threw litter everywhere and painted on the walls. Some picked flowers, destroyed trees and hurt animals. And even worse, some smoked in the woods. How dangerous!Luckily,things have changed now.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly to animals.Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept.All these changes make us happy.As a student, I think we should know it’s our duty to protect the environment.In order to make our city more beautiful, let’s behave well and try our best to help fight against bad behaviors.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料内容要点突出，条理清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些要点内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用多种句式，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语如感叹句和被动句、be friendly to sb、it’s one’s duty to do sth、try one’s best to do sth等，这为文章增色不少。