Question

13．假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda参加了汉语培训班学习汉语．她最近写信 向你询问如何学习外语．请根据下列提示和你自已学习英语的体会给Linda写一封 回信．

注意：①回信需要包括全部要点；
②文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
③词数80〜100．
Dear Linda，
I'm very glad that you are learning Chinese．I know it isn，t easy to learn a foreign language，but I have some ideas that may help．
                                      
Best wishes!
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Firstly，①it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes②so that you can go over your lessons later．首先，在课堂上认真听老师讲课是非常重要的，并做一些笔记，以便你可以复习功课．
①it be+adj+to do sth，做某事是…的，it为形式主语，不定式为真正的主语．
②so that引导目的状语从句，"以便"
高分句型二：
①What's more，②you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly everyday．更甚的是，你最好把你的时间计划好，每天都有规律地学习它．
①What's more另外，而且
②had better do sth最好做某事

解答 I'm sure you'll succeed with/through your hard work．One possible version
Dear Linda，
I'm very glad that you are learning Chinese．I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language，but I have some ideas that may help．
Firstly，it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later．【高分句型一】Secondly，try to catch every chance/take every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese，both in and out of class．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．Then try to listen and read more in Chinese．What's more，you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly everyday．【高分句型二】
Above all，I think you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty．【如何学好英语的几点建议】
I'm sure you'11 succeed with/through your hard work．【总结全文】
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．