Question

14．假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书．请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书．

Key points （要点）	Word and  expressions for reference．（参考词汇）
What the name is	The old man and the sea	…
Who wrote it	Ernest Hemingway，America．	…
What it is about	Fisherman fight against fish and nature．	…
Why I like it	Meaningful，never give up，well known  sentence"man is not made for defeat"．	Interesting，helpful， Well-known sentence …

注意：（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍．
     （2）短文内容可适当增加；
     （3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名．
     （4）词数80-100；
     （5）短文首句仅供选择使用不计入总词数．
   短文首句：The book I'd like to share with you is the old man and the sea．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
This book tells about a fisherman①who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea，but finds②it hard to take it home这本书讲述了一个足够幸运的能抓住大鱼的渔夫，但是发现很难带回家．
①who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰fisherman．
②it作为形式宾语，动词不定式做真正宾语．
【高分句型二】
This tells us ①that nothing seems terrible②as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart这个告诉我们只要我们有强大的意志和勇敢的心没有什么似乎是可怕的．
①that引导的宾语从句．
②as long as只要，引导的条件状语从句

解答 The book I'd like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea，written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway．（书名和作者）This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea，but finds it hard to take it home．【高分句型一】On the way back，he has to fight against the fish，and the sea as well．（内容）
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties．I still remember the well-known sentence from the book：Man is not made for defeat．This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart【高分句型二】．（喜爱的理由）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．