Question

19．假如你是Richard，今天是父亲节．请给爸爸写一封信．信的内容必须包括如下两点：①表达对爸爸的祝福和感谢；②给出至少两个理由说服爸爸同意你毎夭打半个小时的篮球
要求：
（1）信中不得出现真实校名和姓名．
（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确：
（3）60-80个单词，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Dad，
Today is Father's Day．
I hope you are happy and healthy every day．Thank you for everything you have done for me．
I know you are worried about my study，so you don't want me to play basketball too much．But I can't study all day long，Sometimes I need to relax．I really enjoy playing basketball．It keeps me healthy．
Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？I promise I will try my best in my study．
Yours，
Richard．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封在父亲节写给父亲的一封信，首先仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息．利用句型Thank you for everything you have done for me．写出了对父亲的"爱"，还运用了Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？这样的句子，委婉得提出了请求，最后表达了自己的决心和打算，让自己的父亲放心自己的学习．写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．

解答 Dear Dad，
Today is Father's Day．I hope you are happy and healthy every day．Thank you for everything you have done for me．
I know you are worried about my study，so you don't want me to play basketball too much．But I can't study all day long，Sometimes I need to relax．I really enjoy playing basketball．It keeps me healthy．
Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day？I promise I will try my best in my study．
Yours，
Richard

点评 文章语言表达符合英语习惯，条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，时态恰当，是一篇优秀习作．