Question

根据下列表格提示，以“My Favourite Shopping Mall"”为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。要求包含表格所有内容，并适当发挥。

名称	阳光购物中心
位置	学校附近	楼层	共4层，每层都很大
一楼	服装店：种类多，物美价廉
二楼	书店：可以…… 礼品店：……
三楼	餐厅：来自不同国家的食物, ……
四楼	电影院：我的最爱，因为……
我的感受	是一个好玩又可以会见朋友的好地方！

                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
The Sunshine Shopping Mall is near my school. There are four floors and each floor is very big.
On the first floor, there are some clothes shops. There are many kinds of clothes in it. They are very cheep. Girls like them very much. There is a bookshop on the second floor, you can read books there. There is also a gift shop on it. We can buy gifts for our friends. There are many restaurant on the third floor. You can eat different kinds of food there. On the top floor, there is a cinema. We can see new films there.
The mall is an interesting place to meet friends and have fun.

试题分析：
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍阳光购物中心。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，we can......及The mall is......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的感受。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了阳光购物中心的位置和楼层，接下来介绍各楼层所卖的商品种类，最后表达自己的感受。此处用了 on the second floor,  different kinds of ，have fun.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。