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BBC World Have Your Say："Life in China" Every day，BBC News on TV，radio and online brings you stories from across the world．But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you． Have got a story about life in China today？If you do，please put your stories here．

I like travaling and I have traveled a lot around China．During the trip，I often find that a number of Chinese don't have good pulic manners（举止）．They always loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere．The worst is that they often break the rules in public．For example，when I travled in HongKong in January this year，I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground，which is against the rules．However，the kid's mother didn't think he did wrong．Can you believe it？Let's improve our public manners．（Mike，Shenzhen）

I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyang，Anhui Province．Like many other left-behind children（留守儿童 ）in China，l live with my grandparents now．my father went to work in Shanghai several years ago．Last year，my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before．They tell me to listen to my grandparents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study．I really miss my parents ans I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai．I think every child needs parents'love and care．（Wu Peigen，Anhui Province）

假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法． 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？
2．你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法．
3．就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名．
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上．
Dear Editor，
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today，
Iam interested in Mike's story，because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou．I can't stand bad
manners in public，either．In fact，I really get angry when people jump the queen
and smoke in non-smoking areas．I think it's wrong to break the rules in public．
In my opinion，we should know more about good manners．On the other hand，we had
better stop people around us from being rude．If we can't stop them，we can always
ask the police or someone like that for help．
Yours，
Li Ming
                                                                       Your，
                                                                       Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是看了上述故事后，给栏目组写封邮件表达一下自己的看法．注意邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？
2．你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法．
3．就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议．
第一篇文章的大意是：英国的广播公司每天都给你们带来来自全世界的不同的故事，但是我们想听到的是关于你的故事？你有在中国生活的故事吗？如果有，请将故事写在这．
第二篇文章的大意是：我喜欢旅游，旅行中我经常发现许多中国人的行为举止不够好，他们经常大声讲电话，四处抽烟，最遭的是他们不遵守规则，例如我在香港看见一个小男孩不遵守规则，但是他的妈妈认为是对的，让我们改善我们的举止吧！
第三篇文章的大意是：我是来自于安徽阜阳的一个穷山村的男孩，像其他的留守儿童一样，我和我的爷爷奶奶一起住，爸爸在上海工作，去年我的妈妈也去上海照顾我的爸爸，他们让我听爷爷奶奶的话并且一个月打两次电话询问我的学习，我真的想我的爸爸妈妈，我希望我能去上海上学，我认为每个小孩都希望有父母的关爱．
常用到的重点短语：
be interested in 对…感兴趣
can't stand 无法忍受
in fact事实上
on the other hand另一方面
had better do sth最好做某事
stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．I ①am interested in Mike's story，②because I had the same experience③when I traveled in Guangzhou．
①be interested in 对…感兴趣．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③when引导的时间状语从句．
2．①On the other hand，we②had better③stop people ④around us from being rude．
①on the other hand另一方面．
②had better do sth最好做某事．
③stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
④around us介词短语做后置定语，修饰people．

解答 Dear Editor，
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today．I am interested in Mike's story，because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou．【高分句型】（你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么）I can't stand bad manners in public，either．In fact，I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas．I think it's wrong to break the rules in public．（你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法）In my opinion，we should know more about good manners．On the other hand，we had better stop people around us from being rude．【高分句型】If we can't stop them，we can always ask the police or someone like that for help．（解决问题的建议）
Yours，
Li Ming

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．