Question

【题目】书面表达

母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列提供的信息，写一篇词数不少于60词的短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。

提示：1) Introduction: her age, her job, her look, her ability, her hobby

2) What did she do for you?

3) What will you do for her?

My mother

Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious and healthy food for me..

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，动笔前先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要切合文章要表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。