Question

10．请根据下面中文提示以为题写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍郑希的一段经历．
假你有个好朋友，名字叫郑希，他上个月生病了．因为他过去饮食习惯不好，不吃早饭，爱吃一些垃圾食品，而且不爱运动．现在他过着健康而快乐的生活，喜欢吃蔬菜和水果，也经常运动，还参加了学校篮球队．
参考词汇：in the past，junk food （垃圾食品），outdoor activities．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He was ill last month because he had an unhealthy eating habit in the past他上个月生病了．因为他过去饮食习惯不好
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
He thinks①②it's important to be healthy．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 I have a best friend，Zhengxi．He was ill last month because he had an unhealthy eating habit in the past．【高分句型一】He didn't have breakfast，and he liked eating junk food．He didn't take outdoor activities．（过去）But now he is more healthy and happier．He likes fruit and vegetables．He usually plays sports and is a member of school basketball team．（现在）He thinks it's important to be healthy．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．