Question

10．满假设你是Tony，初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的李老师陪伴你度过了三年校园生活．回顾其中的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记．请你用英语给他写封信，和他说说感激的心里话．要点提示：
1．就要离别了，有很多心里话想说．
2．回顾三年来，教师的辛勤劳动，教学有趣，待人友好．
3．和我们相处很好，生活上关爱我们，学习上严格要求我们．
4．还记得当我考试失败时，鼓励我．生活上遇到难处时，帮助我．
5．我们的学业有很大进步．给我们的太多太多，感激不尽．
要求：1．词数80词左右．文章开头已给出．不计入词数．
2 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥，行文连贯．
3．表达清楚，语句通顺，书写规范．
参考词汇：work hard，friendly，fail in exams，encourage，make much progress．

Answer 1

分析 ①You also get on well with us．你也和我们相处得很好．句子考查短语get on well with sb和某某相处融洽．
②You are strict with us in study and take care of us in life．你对我们学习很严格，并且在生活中照顾我们，句子中be strict with sb对某某要求严格；in study 在学习方面；take care of 照顾，照料．

解答 Dear  Mr Li：
I am leaving you and the lovely junior school life．I have so many words from my heart to say．（引出话题）You have been working hard for three years．I won't forget that your class is so interesting．You are very friendly to us．You also get on well with us（高分句型）．You are strict with us in study and take care of us in life（高分句型）．I sill remember When I failed in exams，You encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life．You always helped me．With your help，We make much progress．（学习生活的点点滴滴）You have given us so much．Thanks a lot for what you have done for us!All the best for you!（感谢与祝愿）
Yours
Tony

点评 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑．在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅．同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少．在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．