Question

【题目】书面表达。

作为一名七年级学生，请你结合实际情况，并根据下面的问题提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，可适当发挥。文章开头已给出，不计入词数。

1. What subjects do you have this term?

2. What’s your favorite subject?

3. Why do you like it?

4. Who is your teacher and how is his / her class?

5. When do you have it?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone. I am Jack. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. I’d like to tell you my favorite subject at school. I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on. My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends. My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively. We have English class on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据题目中的提示写一写自己最喜欢的科目。我们在短文中需要说明自己最喜欢的科目是什么、为什么喜欢它、你的老师是谁、他的课怎么样以及你什么时候上这门课程。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。这个话题是学生们比较熟悉的，我们的学习中涉及到很多科目，如语文、数学、英语等，我们可以从中选择一门科目，说明喜欢它的原因。我们可以根据这些问题的提示，将这里内容用正确的英语表达出来。分清主次，还要注意表达的先后顺序，注意上下句的衔接，使用更多的连词和短语，是文意表达流畅、完整。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者告诉了我们自己最喜欢的科目，以及喜欢它的原因。整篇短文的内容非常丰富，意思也很完整，层次也很分明。首先作者先点明自己在学校里都学习哪些科目，I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on，这里作者使用了表示举例的短语such as以及短语and so on；接下来作者说明了自己最喜欢的科目是英语以及喜欢它的原因，My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends.这是文章的主体，所以语句比较多。最后作者提到了自己的英语老师和上英语课的时间，My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively。