Question

书面表达(共1小题,计15分)

上个星期你买了一部手机，请按下列要求描述一下这个手机，然后说说手机的好处与坏处。要求书写认真，不低于100词。

1. 价钱：￥880.00

2. 颜色： 红色

3. 材料：塑料和金属（plastic and metal）

4. 产地： 广州

5. 生产日期：2014年1月6日

6. 优点（advantage）发送信息（message）、联系朋友、上网、听歌、看新闻。

7. 缺点（disadvantage）过度使用对眼睛不好、影响学业、不环保、浪费钱。

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Answer 1

Last week I bought a mobile phone for 880 yuan. It is red and it is made from plastic and metal. It was made in Guangzhou on January 1, 2014. Mobile phones have not only advantage but also disadvantage.

As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to send information and keep touch with friends. we can ues the mobile phone to search the internet,listen to songs and read news. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.

But it is bad for the eyes if we use the mobile phone too much. It is also in the way of schoolwork. It also pollutes our environment ，wastes our money

In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。首先介绍这个手机的价格，颜色，产地，材料及生产日期，这里会用到被动语态。之后介绍使用手机的优点和缺点。这里主要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】这篇短文这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用如：As we know，In my opinion，it is bad for the eyes，in the way of，one of the quickest tools for us to send information等。

考点：话题作文。