Question

书面表达
下表是Wendy在春节期间某天的旅游记录：请根据表中所提供的信息, 帮助她写一封邮件, 告诉她在北京的网友自己的旅行情况。要求：70词左右（不包括已给的开头）。

	Main points	Details
Place	Hong Kong	The Oriental Pearl (东方之珠), a wonderful city
Date	February 6	pleasant weather
People	My parents and I
Activities	Hong Kong Disneyland	Fantasyland and Adventureland
	Hong Kong Ocean Park	Took many photos of sea animals
Feeling	Excited	Want to see other places of interest

Dear Mary,
It was a wonderful day today! And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!________________
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Yours,
Wendy

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mary,
It was a wonderful day today. And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!
Hong Kong is famous as the Oriental Pearl. It is a wonderful city. We had pleasant weather today. In the morning, my parents and I went to Hong Kong Disneyland. We visited Fantasyland and Adventureland. We also watched a parade of Disney characters. Later we visited Hong Kong Ocean Park. We took many photos of the sea animals there.
I was so excited. And tomorrow, I want to see more places of interest!
Yours,
Wendy

试题分析：本文所给材料较为详细，要求介绍自己的一次旅行。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般过去态时态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。