Question

朋友会给你带来欢乐、朋友能解除你学习生活的烦恼，真正的朋友是患难与共。你的朋友如何呢？请你以“My Good Friend”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；

My Good Friend

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

My Good Friend

  I have many friends, but my good friend is LiHua.  She is 14 years old now and she is a smart and healthy girl. She is fond of running and she never eats junk food. She is interested in playing volleyball, so we often play it together. She shares happiness and sadness with me. She has a wonderful memory, and she can remember all the things that we have experienced. She always encourages me to work hard.

She is my good friend, and I hope we will keep in touch with each other. 

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is……；she never eats……；She shares……及she can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己要和好友保持联系的愿望。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍朋友的特点和喜好，最后希望我们要保持联系。此处用了is fond of，is interested in，has a wonderful memory, encourages me to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。