Question

【题目】书面表达

以下是我和我的朋友Jane和Michael 过去和现在的业余爱好。请根据表格内容写一篇以“Our hobbies”为题的短文，描述每个人过去和现在的爱好，以及喜爱的原因。80词左右。

Names	In the past	Now	Reasons
I	Watch TV	Run	Build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy
Michael	Listen to music	Swim	Be good for heart，relax
Jane	Go shopping	Collect stamps	Great fun

Our hobbies

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our hobbies

I liked watching TV in the past, but now I like running. I think running can build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy. I have two good friends. One is Michael. He liked listening to music in the past. But now his hobby is to swim. He thinks it’s good for his heart, at the same time he can relax himself through swimming. The other is Jane. She used to go shopping, but now she likes collecting stamps better. She thinks collecting stamps is great fun.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求按照题目结合表格完成这篇作文，我们要用简单准确的句子把表格中的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要注意运用一般现在时与一般过去时这两种时态。来描述每个人过去和现在的爱好，以及喜爱的原因。根据材料内容可知主语是第三人称与第三人称。并注意一般现在时态的动词的三单形式。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容简明、扼要地阐明了表格中列举的三个人过去和现在的业余爱好。并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如: I think running can build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy. But now his hobby is to swim. She thinks collecting stamps is great fun.学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。