Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。十月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；

3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

注意：1．词数：100词左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

It has been a month since you studied in Beijing.How are things going these days? I'm writing to tell you that I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in October.The opportunity is of great importance for me,so I am busy making preparations for it to have a good performance.

However, I still have some difficulty in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.I miss you so much that I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.

I am looking forward to the cheerful moment that we will spend together.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封邮件，是学生非常熟悉的题材。一般现在时为主，文章的要点基本上都已经给出来了，考生只需要翻译成英文即可，在写作时要注意使用合适的连接词，如however; meanwhile; for one thing, for another等。同时注意使用高级词汇结构如of great importance等让文章更有档次。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文章用到了一些好的句型I'm writing to tell you that I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in October;.I miss you so much that I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。